Feedback

Positives
-Good Ident.
-Looked at characters,titles,font etc. in a lot of detail.
-Like the test footage, looks professional.
-Very neat and impressive. Easy to read and understand.
-Lots of images.
-Lots of detailed notes.
-Very detailed.
-Amazing detail.

Areas for improvement
-2 Analysis posts of Mean Girls, should be made into one post.
-Could have put more detail into some of the lists of conventions.
-Lack of information for call sheet.
-Not enough pictures.

How will we respond to this feedback?
-Our Mean Girls analysis blogs will stay seperate as they are analysing different aspects of the film.
-We will expand the detail on our chosen genre, and provide evidence of costume, location and soundtrack conventions.
-If we do decide to include filming we will expand on the call sheet blog.
-Within the costume and location blogs we will include lots of images/evidence.

How does this blog compare to our thriller blog?
Jonny - "this blog is presented in a lot more detail than my previos one. also it is presented clearer and a is genuinely a better blog"
Alex and Rachel - "Although our thriller blog got blog of the week so was therefore very detailed, our current blog is showing clearer evidence of film preparation and includes more in-depth analysis using the micr0-elements"